I am a Year 4 student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. My teacher is Miss H. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Friday, December 10, 2021
The legend of awarua the taniwha of porirua
Hi there this today I have made a story about Awarua the taniwha who has found out that her wings can fly but she dosen't know how to fly. Read more to find out what happens next
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Hi Kelicia. That is a great story. Next time you could make sure you can say the sentences with one breath.
ReplyDeleteWould be good to see more stories from you